I know I haven't checked your journal for some time, but now I finally found some time and I come back to this. Wow! There's like a GAZILLION new superlong chapters of your Affinityverse and then this new gem, too. Wow! You're a marvellously prolific writer and iT'S ALL SO STELLAR *cries forever*
Thank you so much for existing and sharing your awesomeness. Here, have a list of some things I loved most, because naturally curious!me read the new fic with this beautiful trope first, even before catching up on the Affinityverse that I still love to death (I'LL HAVE SO MUCH READING TO DO, YOU CAN'T MAGINE HOW HAPPY I AM. I feel like crying. Happy tears, of course):
- you taking tropes and weaving them into magnificently 'new' stories. Seriously. This is a well-loved trope, but it never comes across trope-y, if you know what I mean. You use it in a way that seems fresh and infinitely exciting.
- Athos can feel Aramis!!!!!! *_* *faints*
- "Porthos is already healing." "Technically, so am I." hdbfihugbui. wow. yes. this.
- Aramis' first worry is if Porthos is okay. Just. Hhh. Yes. So good. So very good.
- I love your writing so much, seriously. The characters love each other so much, and they fit so well, and thEY LOVE EACH OTHER SO MUCH. And Aramis' heart has enough love for both of them and loving two people doesn't mean he has less love for the individual people, and you write that so well, and you seem to understand perfectly how that's possible, because for some people it IS, it so IS, and yes, that's so very much Aramis, and just. I love you so much. Thank you ;A;
- 'The balcony of their apartment has room for two dead plants in ceramic pots, and the collection of empty bottles Aramis and Porthos keep along the windowsill because they keep missing the recycling day and don't mind looking like alcoholics.' This entire sentence is perfect. 'room for two dead plants' - my own balcony also rooms a dead plant (and some live ones), so that alone got me weirdly excited and happy. And then the thing with the bottles, ah, it makes everything so much more REAL, and it's funny, too. PERFECTION!
- Aramis fussing over Porthos and ignoring his own injuries. ;A; YES! Aramis loves Porthos *screams this*
- SO are Charon and Flea also werewolves, then? And were they his pack? And how did he feel when he left them? PORTHOOOS!!!! ;A; I need to know these things. Because reasons.
- Athos' struggle re: Aramis and himself being a vampire who really wants to bite him (again) but also really really doesn't, and who's afraid he might be like 'them'. And this: 'He says, "Your neck is still a problem."' That's such an Athos thing to say.
- 'Because Athos did drink from him, once, because he had no fucking choice' Why did he have to bite Aramis, though, aaaah! What happened? How did it happen? How did he like it? Was he horrified during, or only after? Or not horrified, because this really good and potentially helpful thing came out of it? Or does he feel bad about it? And does he dream about biting Aramis? Are they good dreams or are they nightmares, or are they nightmares specifically because they feel like such good dreams while he's dreaming them? Will we get a flashback? The suspense is killing meeeeee~ I love you.
- fearless Aramis who's a beautiful oxymoron; really fragile and mortal, but at the same time very strong and able to defend himself (up to a point)
- 'but he's still the only human Athos has ever met who could convince a vampire and a werewolf to share him, and his bed, and kill neither him nor each other' THE THREE OF THEM BELONG TOGETHER and I'm so glad they are ;A;
- 'caught in his senses like a moth ever-fluttering in the corner of the room.' what a vivid description. Wow. So very fitting. WOW! I'm stunned. Wow.
In conclusion: I'M OFF TO READ THE NEXT PART AND I'M SO EXCITED AND HAPPY THAT I KEEP SCREAMING AT YOU I'm so sorry for that, but. MY FEELINGS! THEY ARE ALL OVER THE PLACE!
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Date: 2015-08-29 09:15 am (UTC)Thank you so much for existing and sharing your awesomeness.
Here, have a list of some things I loved most, because naturally curious!me read the new fic with this beautiful trope first, even before catching up on the Affinityverse that I still love to death (I'LL HAVE SO MUCH READING TO DO, YOU CAN'T MAGINE HOW HAPPY I AM. I feel like crying. Happy tears, of course):
- you taking tropes and weaving them into magnificently 'new' stories. Seriously. This is a well-loved trope, but it never comes across trope-y, if you know what I mean. You use it in a way that seems fresh and infinitely exciting.
- Athos can feel Aramis!!!!!! *_*
*faints*
- "Porthos is already healing."
"Technically, so am I."
hdbfihugbui. wow. yes. this.
- Aramis' first worry is if Porthos is okay. Just. Hhh. Yes. So good. So very good.
- I love your writing so much, seriously. The characters love each other so much, and they fit so well, and thEY LOVE EACH OTHER SO MUCH. And Aramis' heart has enough love for both of them and loving two people doesn't mean he has less love for the individual people, and you write that so well, and you seem to understand perfectly how that's possible, because for some people it IS, it so IS, and yes, that's so very much Aramis, and just. I love you so much. Thank you ;A;
- 'The balcony of their apartment has room for two dead plants in ceramic pots, and the collection of empty bottles Aramis and Porthos keep along the windowsill because they keep missing the recycling day and don't mind looking like alcoholics.' This entire sentence is perfect. 'room for two dead plants' - my own balcony also rooms a dead plant (and some live ones), so that alone got me weirdly excited and happy. And then the thing with the bottles, ah, it makes everything so much more REAL, and it's funny, too. PERFECTION!
- Aramis fussing over Porthos and ignoring his own injuries. ;A; YES! Aramis loves Porthos *screams this*
- SO are Charon and Flea also werewolves, then? And were they his pack? And how did he feel when he left them? PORTHOOOS!!!! ;A; I need to know these things. Because reasons.
- Athos' struggle re: Aramis and himself being a vampire who really wants to bite him (again) but also really really doesn't, and who's afraid he might be like 'them'. And this:
'He says, "Your neck is still a problem."'
That's such an Athos thing to say.
- 'Because Athos did drink from him, once, because he had no fucking choice'
Why did he have to bite Aramis, though, aaaah! What happened? How did it happen? How did he like it? Was he horrified during, or only after? Or not horrified, because this really good and potentially helpful thing came out of it? Or does he feel bad about it? And does he dream about biting Aramis? Are they good dreams or are they nightmares, or are they nightmares specifically because they feel like such good dreams while he's dreaming them? Will we get a flashback? The suspense is killing meeeeee~
I love you.
- fearless Aramis who's a beautiful oxymoron; really fragile and mortal, but at the same time very strong and able to defend himself (up to a point)
- 'but he's still the only human Athos has ever met who could convince a vampire and a werewolf to share him, and his bed, and kill neither him nor each other'
THE THREE OF THEM BELONG TOGETHER and I'm so glad they are ;A;
- 'caught in his senses like a moth ever-fluttering in the corner of the room.' what a vivid description. Wow. So very fitting. WOW! I'm stunned. Wow.
In conclusion: I'M OFF TO READ THE NEXT PART AND I'M SO EXCITED AND HAPPY THAT I KEEP SCREAMING AT YOU I'm so sorry for that, but. MY FEELINGS! THEY ARE ALL OVER THE PLACE!